Friday, November 4, 2011

Page 2

Page the second.

6 comments:

Will Sliney said...

Oooh slick storytelling move there bouyo

Stephen Mooney said...

Cheers Will. Glad it reads well. One of the best things about writing my own book is that I get to try out little storytelling beats like that wherever I want.

Stephen Thompson said...

Brave bit of storytelling there, that's a tricky one to pull off clearly. Plus If you read both pages you get a really nice sense of the lead in now.

Stephen Mooney said...

Yeah, that was the plan Thomps. Thanks for the input on the page earlier.

galvinator said...

It's like watching each episode on it's own when you don't have the box set. Speed it up. Not even a word of dialgue yet! Ha ha. Ah no great work man, shapin up beautifully.

Stephen Mooney said...

Ha, I gotta space the stuff out man, or I'd soon run out of material!
I'll stick up the next page now.